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Re: Shades of Violet(5)[scream]
oopsies!
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Violet(5)[scream]
Thanks Crazy. I was hoping it would be intense for other people than me. Violet is supposed to be confusing, but she won't be for long. Yay!
Mar 20, 2010 -
Re: grimoire chp 1 truth p 2
Hey, review my "Dwarven Blood and Tears" and ill review yours
Nov 11, 2009 -
Re: Ballad of the Blood (2)
Please Review
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Behind The Looking Glass: The Awakening (Chapter 1)
Yo, its IR. Nice story. I love the first person view because you can really see into the characters head. Its also a great idea to have both of the ...
Oct 7, 2009 -
Re: Missing You
OK. It was good. though i couldn't understand why the person was waiting. Especially if it seemed the person would never come back. I liked the style but maybe you ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: What do you think? Chapter 1 (rewrite)
I guess it may just not be my type of story, but it seemed just a little bit boring. Maybe liven it up a bit and it will hold the ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: The Nighttime Sky.
I thought it was good and flowed well until the end. When it said about getting home, I was like what does that have anything to do with the poem? ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Australia
I liked this very much. It was a little too wordy though. I seemed to get lost on what it was saying. Also, i had a hard time figuring out ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Lemongrass
This was really original. I didn't understand it all but i guess that's what makes poetry so great. Keep writing
Oct 4, 2009